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RebellingIsTooHardToDoAllAlone by ~magnolia-scent26:iconmagnolia-scent26:



Only saw you over there,
At that table with my friends and that are yours as well.
And this is why,
And the only reason that I stayed so long was because,
As I said,
You were there.
I got in trouble half an hour later with my teacher,
But you were there.
And that makes it okay.

Now let those lines speak for itself.
I know I’m a little rebellious for your tastes.
But do you know what it’s like…
To suddenly realize this feeling?
It’s a negative I can easily admit.

I laugh,
I think it’s love.
Again with this?
It’s crazy and either way,
You won’t look my way.

Fine.
I’ll live on.
Unlike some people,
I’ll live if you don’t stare my way.
It could be a lie,
But really…
As I am someone with no remorse at times,
And yet I care too much for others.

I swear it will kill me one day.
But then the bogeyman will remind me of our promise.
Fine.
I’ll live on.
And wait till he forgets,
I don’t know at the moment though…
He’s remembered a good while.

But either way I shall say:
Fine.
I’ll live on.
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Author's Comments

Quickiee childrenn...update later...so late :P

Update: okay so like the other day since I typed this out...basically YEAHH...what a debate...let's just say something inspired me? ;)

ENJOY--;
OWARI--;

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:iconnani-midori:
I like how verbal your poetry is. I also like the typography. Maybe italics instead of the underline? Sorry if that's too forward a suggestion. This was a really pleasant read, though. Especially in my current mindset =]
:iconmagnolia-scent26:
Or both for compramise? :P
Thankss very muchh :D
Lol if I could ask...what mindset are you in now?
:iconnani-midori:
Pensive. Pretty lost in thought.
:iconmagnolia-scent26:
Ahh I see...
It's okay, so am I :]

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